Pacific_Sky14

I haven't written a review in a while, but I'll try too. I like how you used the details of the setting and imagery to draw the reader into this ...

i just made this up. Sorry for the left over pencil marks, lol, I forgot those. :lol: Overall is it O.K.? :P

My eyes dripped tears down my hot cheeks. My face feels exactly like when I lean over to see what mom's dinner is. Too bad I can't be home. Die ...

When the Jonas Brothers' song, " When you Look me in the Eyes" came out and became a hit, I just drew this about the same week it hit the ...

I always have this picture in my head. I have no idea who he is-really! Although I think he's pretty cute...ha ha. No, see I think it's a very good ...

I drew this about a year ago. It brings back a lot of memories. It's in the window of my mind all the time...this picture.

It's not perfect...but I think it's good? :) This is when she sees a shadow from underneath the door crack.

thx :P

My eyes dripped tears down my hot cheeks. My face feels exactly like when I lean over to see what mom's dinner is. Too bad I can't be home. Die.Die. ...

Hello, I saw a few things that just didns't sound right to me. Maybe I can help. :) About a man who was very smart he was even smarter then ...

The characterization is developedw well :) . I wanted tor ead more. It sounds really good, and uses almost perfect imagery. I'll check out some more of your stories :smt003

Wow, that is very good. I didn't find anything wrong with this, but Hey, that's just on me. Nice job you did. :)

This really sounded powerful. Very nice! :smt002 I'll be critique on one thing, oyu said 'thy' too much. Thats all. You did really well, I love it! :) :mrgreen:

Very Bright colors! wow, nice picture. just perfect. Nice! :)

I remember the bright shine, raining down from the street lights. As I drove down Corpus, along the ocean side. It was getting colder again. We barely knew each other ...