Pacific_Sky14

I felt like I needed to submit a funny piece...and I don't think it is really funny, Ha! :) I just looked outside and saw that ball of sunshine and ...

The sunlight kisses my smile Then leaves at night twist and pass our sky We come together and play. Children and families talk about their day Under the stars where ...

Wow, that was quite something! I liked it. :) It was very fluid and soft and the whole meaning behind evened it out with good imagery. It was a lot ...

I'm noticing that i don't need to lay in this frigid pool any longer OK, first this sentence sounds a bit awkward. So, you're in the "frigid pool" and you ...

I like this peice. It sounds bright and all at the same time makes me hungry. I found this to be simple yet full of meaning in every line... and ...

Wow, Kamas that was really something. That is pretty good for just an expirement! I don't know what half those words mean...but sounds like you used them right... ^.^ I ...

[quote]Walking out of the bathroom and into my living room I glanced past the red velvet couches toward the kitchen, but without much thought decided I would skip breakfast.[quote] This ...

This was an expirement. This looks like it needs bunch of work. Not sure what I should do to make it better or more appealing. Helping me, it makes me ...

The beginning line has the word trafficked. Yes, you guessed. If it is a word, then keep it. Perhaps there is another cool-looking word instead of "trafficked." ^.^* ? Ha-ha. ...

Hey everyone. My name is Darien. I am fifteen and love to write and draw. I also like to write song lyrics and poems. I also play the piano, flute ...

I thought it would be neat to ask what flavor your face would be if it was a pie! I know you'de want to be tasty! I'd be pumpkin! Ha-ha!

I love this poem so much. :) I really like the imagery and the strong words that tie together! I'll read your other posts! :mrgreen: , Pacific

I've had multiple troubles with moving my posts to different genres! HOW do I move my post? Example: ( From Poetry & Song Lyrics TO Fan Genre...) Please HOw do ...

Oh my gosh! If he was real I'd have a massive crush on him, ha-ha! Well, actually there is a guy who looks like him. I think you did very ...

What's your favorite song of 2009? Well, atleast tell me two! I just couldn't decide - ha ha :D My favorite is...... either Replay by IYAZ or Vanilla Twilight by ...