Pacific_Sky14

Nice imagery. I like the chorus. This is cool. :)

I love the second verse! It's so beautiful! There is nothing that was wrong with this. I may be wrong, but it just touched my a way. :) Cool beans, ...

You're song is great! You just need meaning :) My friend, I'm here to help! I think the lines were a bit too short. Here's a tip- Tip: Sometimes, as ...

Oh wow I love the fourth verse! That was amazing! You write very good! I don't see anything wrong with was pretty nice when I read it. It was soft ...

Oh my gosh, ha ha! I think I will use photo shop! That is so right! I can probably make a new one just like this! Thanks, I appreciate your ...

I made this about two years ago.I copied and pasted that guy and did a lot of changes to his shirt and hair...anyway I put a different background and created ...

Wow, I think I am going to force my mom to take me to Wal-Mart to buy a box of Peeps! Those are so cute! Especially the purple ducks! I ...

All those songs sound so interesting!

She Asked: She asked: Do you love me? If only you knew: I said She asked: But why? I can't explain it: I said The second line where you're talking ...

Wow, that sounds great! Just add an "s" after the first "sing" in the second line. :) Nice job. You should continue writing this! You can PM me if you ...

I feel this tickle in my stomach Ticklish, yet soar With every growing minute It hurts my notion’s hearts core. OK, so I won't say anything about rhythm. Over all, ...

Took a look out my door Found myself wanting more All I have is a string of hope There is more I'm asking for More. Sketching memories all over again ...

:roll: :wink: Okay, so I had this cool dream last night and this was it. Except in my head it was way better! Anyway, I need real criticism on this. ...

The last two sentences just popped in at me. I "was like" Whoa! You can sew the lines with the rest of the piece by mentioning Valentine's Day, in a ...

I kind of get it- It makes me wonder what came down on you. I think you did use some good is very cool:) I like your writing. It is ...