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Re: Tears full of wishes and dreams
This poem is beyond beautiful! I love the ideas in this poem; I got goose bumps as I read some of your lines, especially when you preformed it!!! You are ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Stab & Burn
This peom was short, but powerful! Your flow seemed extremely well written! I completely loved it!! You said that this wasn't your best work, well then I want to read ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Watch Me....
Alcohol/Drunk Driver Watch Me Watch me take the lives of a million innocent souls, floating up too golden gates to soon Watch me cause the repeated digging of 6 foot ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Black and Grey
Wow this poem was completel amazingy! I have been in the same place that you are in, so i got a complete sense of what you are going throught, which ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Run Away With Me
Aww this poem was beyond cute!!!!!!!!! As I read I imagined myself being with someone and running away with them just to two of us! iIhope that this poem was ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: We Suddenly Found Ourselves Looking Up
Besides the few gramatical errors, which i think that capatalizing a peom and making sure that its grammatically correct is kinda senseless, this poem was amazing. It was deep and ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Lump in My Throat
your writing style is amazing, you had unique ways of filling in your sentences and making them whole. those unique styles are what makes amaing writers!!
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Puppet
this poem was incredible, but i think you could expand more, but this is your poem and if you dont know that its still amazing
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Buried in Ash
the poem had a lot of strong deep emotions!!!! thats what made it so amazing!!!!!
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Save My Soul
like the others have said, you have some slight grammer errors, but other than that this poem was amazing! i loved it!
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: DELTE
wow!!! these are amazing. You are really good!
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: To all those people
This poem was amazing. I loved every line, the sense of that day came back to me, and i got to see a glimpse of a heors perspective, who acted ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: White lines
This poem was, in my mind, amazingly beautiful. Your flow is incredible, your sense of the topic is outstanding, your an amazing poet, keep it up can't wait to read ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Only Hope
I inject my body with an addicting drug, my brain stops working, completely numb. My heart pumps quickly, my vision blurs, your sweet poison infects my blood stream, so i ...
Sep 8, 2011
