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Alright, I too looked at the criticism this poem has been given and I pondered whether or not write anything. This IS a writing forum and the purpose of this ...

Thanks for critiquing my work and giving my some great suggestions.

Ohhhh. That makes sense. Well either way it's a great poem!

Well, "or" usually suggests and alternative or an opposite. With all of the negativity you started off with by writing: "As those who raped the earth, and gave nothing back? ...

God, Just out of curiosity, what did you mean by "Glow-In-The-Dark"?