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it's the second chapter, the "adventurous" hasn't crept in yet

Hey I like it; You're waxing Tolkien and doing it very well at that. When I write fantasy, I do it like that too :P

The black troika pulled up to the side of the road; Beyond the shoulder was a thick outcropping of vegetation and fallen branches. Athen and Jonathan got out and pulled ...

Thanks for the crit, aed. And yes, I did the poem myself, even though I kinda pulled it out of my butt X_x

The world engulfed in Chaos, Wrapped in her cold hands, The sun will go down, And will ne'er rise again. The bones of our fathers, The bones of our mothers ...

Hope you have a good time here Mara :D

Wow, dude, you know you have a good story when your first chapter compells the crap out of people. Poor aedomir :[

I like it dude! It's very tolkien-y, but its also kinda bleak in the sense of battle and all that. I like it. You've got talent my man, I'm gonna ...

thanks for the warm welcome. *sniff* this is the best forum ive ever been on! *runs away weeping like a wuss* :cry:

What's up guys, I'm bernie. I've been checking out this site for a couple weeks and I decided to join. This place is like something outta my dreams :D Expect ...