- Re: Two New ones Apr 17, 2008
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Re: Critiques, Anyone?
Since you asked.
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: This Visious Circle
This circle, It’s vicious, Never stopping, The fights, Caused by you, Are flowing, [s]And flowing,[/s] A punch, Then another, [s]Then another[/s], [s]Then a punch,[/s] Again and again, Never stoppin
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
Hahaha I wouldn't call myself a good girl, I just think there is always a way to state your beliefs without offending someone else.
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Crit Pit
Hello! So some people get the ending on this poem, and others do not. I was wondering what you think :) Please and Thank you! OverEasy
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Pep For Poets
Hello! Back with another :) Please and Thank you! OverEasy
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part One of Three)
Aww! This is so sad, there is a lot of really good things here. I can feel your emotion, and the way you described the doctor was very good. Scenes ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Dejection
Sumi pretty much took the words out of my mouth, so I'll not repeat them. I will say this, try to read some poetry in your spare time. It will ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Why do you believe/not believe in God?
I simply don't believe in the same things that the bible often tells about. There are many things that don't make sense to me about it, and so I don't ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Are Mormons Christians?
Isn't that why they call themselves muslums?
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: The Critique Boutique
Hello! So I am back for one more. Please and Thank you! OverEasy
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Yoyo's Crit Requests
Hey Yoyo Dear! I've got a poem for you :) Much Love Oye
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: High School Students
Hmm, I am very sorry to say that I am really not fond of this. There is very little that is actually poetic about it, I pretty much just see ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Rain Drop
cascading in a downward spiral, heading further and further toward an unsuspecting earth, gyrating endlessly to a certain death below, arriving with a quiet little plop.
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: A Pierced Heart
I really like this a lot. It's hard to do something that is done so often and really make it your own, and you have done that here :)
Apr 15, 2008
