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Re: Wars.
I am not sure how I feel about this, it's very...bland? When you are talking about something like War, you could have some really good description, here you just say ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Chapter Two
Author Note: I should let everyone know that even though this is posted in the Romance forum, it is not just a romantic story line. If you are looking for ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising
Lissa, Exotic Slave The ship shook beneath her, sending Lissa to her knees and the crossbow skittering across the deck. She growled and drew her dagger from its sheath. She ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Uprising Discussion
For those of you that don't know Lissa is *not* actually crazy. Her body is physically reliant on the forest, technically she should be dead right now, and for reason ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Counseling
Bragging about being jerks now? There is a way to debate without being a jerk, and often times not being a jerk will actually mean that people will hear what ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising
Lissa, Exotic Slave The weapon in her hand was not foreign; before she had been created she was a human and a hunter. She toyed with the workings of it; ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: A Little Questionnaire
1) When did you join YWS? Jan. 1, 2008 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? Not really, I was just browsing sites looking ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Chapter One
It was most helpful, Adna-dear! I will for sure tell you when I post something new. And yes, the distraction from her thoughts was most intentional. ;) glad you caught ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: A Simple Mistake (Prologue) [edited]
[Edit]*giggles* I do address myself by my full name in my head. [origional] I do address myself by my head in my name.
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising
Lissa, Exotic Slave She stared at her meal and groaned, slowly bringing to dish to her lips and taking a long pull of the liquid into her mouth and swallowing ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Medicine = God?
And no, medicine can not give you a metal leg. Doctors give you metal legs. Medicine is used for diseases. Some painkillers may be involved in that, but they aren't ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Clo Needs You!
Clo dear! Pretty please, because I am so totally your favorite? (I won't tell Connie) Mucho thankies OverEasy
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Jared's Critique Lounge
Jared darling! I have been working on a new story, it's best described as "Dramatic Fiction" but since there is no section for that, I have placed it in Romance. ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: I eat reviews
Err... I was hoping that because I love you, I might be able to possibly post two chapters? They are both pathetically short... if that helps ^.^ If you can ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
Me!
Dec 5, 2008
