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Hahaha true story :p Ok ok ok I'm sorry, I just really need help on chapter two, I feel like I am rushing a lot again.

Read the post goose, I am only asking for one review :p but the part that needs reviewing is chapter two! The first two have been looked over really well ...

Favorite: (I am going by what I say the most here) Either adorable or ridiculous. Least Favorite: Cockily. (used in a sentence) He grinned cockily. Try saying: He grinned in ...

Gah do you mind if I post a few things? I have just started a story and the Prologue and chapter 1 don't really need reviews, but Chapter two could ...

4/10 kind of boring really

*epic gasp* That's what that key does? You're kidding me!

Haha nice. 8/10 Puns ftw.

I am not sure, in a society based of beauty rather than intelligence, being pretty is fairly important. The one thing they tell you when going into a job interview, ...

After my next post Lissa is going to be catatonic again, please don't write dialogue for her into your post. She'll wake up again later, but I want to do ...

>.> chill hon, it's just a signature.

*giggles* it made me laugh 7/10 *gasps* my opinion is to be ignored?

4/10 you can do better than that.

Everyone is complaining that they don't know where I am going with this, perhaps it is just me, but if you knew where I was going after the first few ...

She smiles?

I have PTSD, but I am going to need some specific questions ^.^ Right now you're leaving it pretty broad. PM me please? If you have questions I have no ...