OutOfInk

It's good. It kind of looks like you've been thinking about this for a while.

Ok thanks :D

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Ssss Mmmm... To be honest with you I didn't like it. I did, however, enjoy your writing style, especially the first paragraph . But stories about diseases moreover HIV and ...

I liked it, I love little short-nothings, I write them a lot too. I can tell it needs work. I didn't exactly get a good grasp on the meaning but ...

Thanks...

Ok, I'll tell you what you need to do. Get a book (a novel at best) and study how it is writen. About two years ago I was pretty bad ...

Yeah. I actually wrote this a long time ago.

...Writer's Block... The blank page, oh how it taunts me so. It laughs at me, digging deep into my soul as it hinders all signs of originality and creativity. And ...

I know this has some spelling errors but please try to read through. Eddy Sullivan followed the guard down the long white hall. In his mind he was assured that ...

Can you say schitzophrenic???? :smt064 It was cute I guess. The only spelling errors I found was at the top when you said between "TO" humans. It should be between ...

No my daddy's still livin. It just kinda came to me one night.

This is a three minute screenplay that I wrote for my friend's dad. It's only the first draft so... yeah. It looks odd because I pasted it on and didn't ...

I liked how you spaced the words, very creative.

Well the whole thing just seemed like a immature rant! A good poem should actually have a point and meaning. This had neither. It made no since and frankly was ...