OrenEmorson

Nice story! It was very emotionally evocative and I really liked the slow reveal regarding the wife's schizophrenia. However, there were a few things that tripped me up as I ...

Really good story. You put a lot into a limited amount of space, and it reads so smoothly. One tiny thing, and this is really just a pet peeve of ...

I liked your story. A lot of raw emotion in it. I agree with the other commenter, though. Your story reads roboticly at times. In this story, you write as ...

Intersting. Is this going to be part of a longer piece? Sarah Webster was a twenty – eight year old lawyer and had been for nearly three years By giving ...

This story was really funny! Your character seems paranoid-schizophrenic (the kind of person who sees messages on the TV, hears messages on the radio). Especially since he's an older guy. ...

This is a pared down version of an original story I wrote for a class a while back. The prompt was to write about death and/or the afterlife. I'm not ...

Hey Starlight :D Thanks for being so welcoming! I look forward to reading some of your stuff as well :) I've only written short stories so far, but I'd love ...

Hey, I'm new to this site and am currently getting my feet wet. Nice little place y'all got here.

I agree about the title - you should scrap it. As for suggestions, I'd have to see where the story goes. Personally, I always add the title last, after the ...

Where the Heart Is Pavul saw Misa coming down the rolling dirt road that slipped between the soft hills edging the Dneister Valley. He caught the look on his older ...

I'm a new user and I'm casting my first line, so to speak. I stumbled across this site just looking for a place to post some stuff. Looks like a ...