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Re: Characters
I do it that way to, but I fill this out as I go so I do not forget anything:]
Apr 23, 2013 -
Re: Describe a Wolf
That makes since, thank you.
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Describe a Wolf
The air brushed through its short fur, as condensation escaped its cringed snout. Saliva coated its tongue as it brushed against sharp, ivory canines; the occasional drop hiting the growned. ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Characters
This is just to see how well you know your own character(s). Below is a character chart, if you can answer each question than you are good to go:? I ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Describe a Wolf
I am writing a story and one of the characters is an actual wolf, claws, teeth, fur you know the works. So I have a scene where he is aggressive ...
Mar 6, 2013 -
Re: I need help from girls aged 14-17
Okay I just turn 18 and work at McDonald's and everyone from my High School hangs out at McDonald's for no reason at all. They goof of outside and make ...
Mar 6, 2013 -
Re: I need some help here
Thank you for the help and comments. I thought there would be more problems with it because it is my first fight scene. I will go through it again and ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Anime
I love FullMetal Alchemist and FullMetal Alchemist Brotherhood. I have seen all the episodes, both movies, read all the chapters and have played all the games that were released in ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: I need some help here
I am in the process of writing a fictional, fantasy, mid-evil story with magic and I cannot get the fight scene right. If anyone has any thought about how I ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Fight Scenes
Link : this is what i got when I went back through it. Von's eyes watched as the other squires and knights watched Max. Von had to admit he was ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Resolutions for 2013
My resolution is to finish my book and do one good deed everyday. Live everyday to the fullest and make every mistake I can- so I won't next year
Jan 2, 2013 -
Re: Just killed a character
You are not crazy. I had to write a death scene for one of my favorite characters and it made me cry. I think it makes someone a better writer ...
Dec 25, 2012 -
Re: Grammar
Grammar is a very tricky thing and English is the hardest language to learn grammar in. In the following quote you wrote I have highlighted the errors you made and ...
Dec 25, 2012 -
Re: Fight Scenes
Thanks for the pointers I will do some research and try and get a good since of what kinds of armor and weaponry would be better. Thanks a LOT
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: Fight Scenes
I am in the middle of my story and I cannot seem to get it sounding the way I want it to. The scene has two straight guys fighting- one ...
Dec 18, 2012
