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Hey Tyler! Sorry it took me so long to get onto this. I really enjoyed this. It's high-paced and tense and I really wanted to find out what would happen ...

Hey Black Thought! I'm after reading another two posts of yours, the "Twilite Series", as well as this one and I had to leave a comment seeing as no-one else ...

Hey Bandgeek! A few grammatical mistakes and stuff but I'm sure you'd probably catch those yourself after a read through. You have a nice knack with dialogue in that it ...

Hi Bandgeek! :D I thought the premise for a story has been set up really well in this piece. I'm intrigued as to what powers your character Jack might have ...

Hi Stori, I enjoyed this, especially the end - very zen :). I like the relaxed atmosphere of the piece and some of your descriptions were very poignant. I felt, ...

Hi TheManintheHat, I really enjoyed this. I think it has great character and the writing was fluent and easy to read. I think the glimpse you have given the reader ...