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Hey Tyler! Sorry it took me so long to get onto this. I really enjoyed this. It's high-paced and tense and I really wanted to find out what would happen ...

Hey Black Thought! I'm after reading another two posts of yours, the "Twilite Series", as well as this one and I had to leave a comment seeing as no-one else ...

That could be complete rubbish by the way. It's just something that I think I may have read somewhere at an unspecified date and in a quite possibly questionable state, ...

Hiya Crescent! Aha I was waiting for the subject of leprachauns to be brought up :P You'd be surprised how many people you see walking around in Ireland that remind ...

Hey Bandgeek! A few grammatical mistakes and stuff but I'm sure you'd probably catch those yourself after a read through. You have a nice knack with dialogue in that it ...

Thanks for the warm welcome all! :D One good novel. That sounds like a great ambition, and one that YWS will certainly help you achieve! What genre do you like ...

Hi Bandgeek! :D I thought the premise for a story has been set up really well in this piece. I'm intrigued as to what powers your character Jack might have ...

Hi everyone!:D I'm new to the sight and just wanted to say my hello's. I am a 16 year old living in the south of Ireland. My hobbies include reading, ...

Hi everyone! I'm new and confused! :D I am something of a novice when it comes to both writing and internet societies like this so I'm still trying to get ...

Hi Stori, I enjoyed this, especially the end - very zen :). I like the relaxed atmosphere of the piece and some of your descriptions were very poignant. I felt, ...

Hi TheManintheHat, I really enjoyed this. I think it has great character and the writing was fluent and easy to read. I think the glimpse you have given the reader ...

This is my first attempt at all this guys so be nice :wink: . His head keeled dangerously. He blinked at the faces swimming before him, trying desperately to penetrate ...