Ofour

OK. I think that the Harry Potter books are a good read, once or twice. However, i do not understand why there is sooooo much hype about them because i ...

This was basically written in my own desperation from a traumatic experience on the school bus. It was the same thing every day, "You talk too much,""Get a life.""Try using ...

The penguin, disliking John's attitude, delivered a forceful punch to his stomach. Grabbing a nearby iron bar he laid into John with gusto. Having killed his target he wandered off ...

Floaty. I liked it but the long lines were a bit odd, maybe split them up. When starting a new stanza use a capital letter, also use them at the ...

Whoa. :shock: That is good. Seriously good.

carrot

I feel that Harry Potter is a very good at being a plain book, nothing more. You can read it, its enjoyable and takes no mental effort. However, the extra ...

"They didn’t know precisely where it was, how and why they were taken in, and who the other prisoners were." Should be "or" instead of second "and". "any dozing off ...

Granted, no idea what your talking about so a car will hit you tomorrow. I wish i never swallowed that paperclip.

i left my heart and my hat behind

Well, I think its more each to his own. Also, it's a bit harsh to exlude people without money problems (not that I don't have money problems). I don't think ...

Granted, there will be four-hundred and ninety eight letters added to the English language to compensate. I wish the sky was yellow (all the time).

Several tortoises dropped from the ceiling as he gingerly tiptoed over a steaming pile of horse manure.

A friend of my second cousin's grandmother told my auntie's manicurist who told the streetsweeper who told a friend of mine who wouldn't tell me what he was doing so ...

Granted, the end will do so instead. I wish there was world peace!