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10/10, happyful.

Because I feel like it, it's fun.

OK.. that was strange. There was no plot, no character development, no description, no anything. I didn't find it funny really because there wasn't much there. Why is this in ...

They're alright but... He always somehow manages to miraculously survive. He always saves the world in just the nickiest of nicks of time. Child versions of James Bond aren't very ...

"he cleared his through," - I think you mean "throat". This was brilliant, you continue to amaze. Please can you give some anwers soon, the waiting is killing me.

" It was my first day in a new school…, again." - I wouldn't put the comma. "I was kind of skeptical." - "Sceptical". "My dad has a problem staying ...

Lol. Not much there to criticise. The rhythym is nice, no grammar or spelling mistakes. It was very funny.

" One light dared to break the complete blackness that was the Hampton house at 1am." - "complete blackness" doesn't sound right to me, I would have put "darkness" instead. ...

"I pouted my lips and slid more gloss over them." - "slid" sounds odd to me. "It was far too long, especially if I wanted to get a guy." - ...

"Deader than I could ever be" - "Deader"? "Thou no crime has been committed" - "Thou" should be "Though". "Can’t ever escape" - That sounds ugly. You don't use any ...

literary (at top of screen) - then go to the fantasy section.

"It’s not that I don’t care...it’s just that I don’t care." - lol. "wave goodbye so innocent" - I don't know why but I think "innocently" sounds better. "Vice and ...

Hear Hear.

Granted, you get to stay at home all your life. I wish computers were cheaper.

Whoa, this was very emotional, but good. Your theme is brilliant and addresses racism well. I like your style, the poem feels alert and very active. I really enjoyed this, ...