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If the music you are listening to contains words then a part of brain immediately diverts to recognising those words. Thus the best way to write well and attentively whilst ...

I don't think smoking will ever be completely banned. When alcohol was banned in America it had a huge amount of problems, simply because everyone still drank because it was ...

It doesn't, and wasn't going to anyway. I wish for an infinite number of wishes.

The only thing I don't like about this is "signals and signs". I know that the redundancy adds to the effect but I feel that this is beyond redundancy, they ...

Only one criticism. "Thy true, noble mind grants me hope. Even so," has eleven syllables :D. Very enjoyable.

In terms of the technicalities of a sonnet this is perfect, although you exclude the iambic pentameter (which is optional anyway). I enjoyed this very much. The rhyming was not ...

"she stared at Rowan with a mixture of puzzlement of interest." - that sounds strange, I'd put "and" instead of the second "of". "You of all people believe that!" - ...

That was good. If the line length was more constant it would be better, The idea is good and you express it well, even if the word order may at ...

"and the golden retriever" - "the"? I'd put "their". "The amount of killings was rising; and these humans were killed like all the rest." - there is no point putting ...

Chapter 1: "Whilst searching through many ancient manuscripts, Drake found an ancient map that showed the way to the magic world where Tera’s Gods reside. The main God was named ...

White, unless your a goth. What have I got in my pocketses?

9/10, would have been 10 but for the spelling mistake :D

Can also be used to separate items in a list. For example: She went to the supermarket and bought a number of things: biscuits; bacon; tomatos; apricots and cheese.

Granted, but it has no wheels. I wish i wasn't colourblind.

"When I didn’t say to this," - that didn't make sense to me. That was an interesting perspective, and well backed up. I enjoyed it very much.