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I think that expression is improved through a written medium, not an internet one. But thought is the purest form of... well... thought.

"otherworldly rhythm as the playrs " - "players". "and faced eachother squarely." - "each other". "the young mn a cruel grimace " - "man". "only seven yers old" - "years". ...

Well, as far as I actually, really know, everything is just a figment of my imagination, so I am the only proven existence. One idea that I entertained for a ...

Everything. That's what makes life so fun, it could mean absolutely nothing!

A powerful adult who goes to University, gets a job, votes for his party, gets married, has children, grows old, gets a pension and dies? The system can be much ...

lol, right back at me.

There is only one thing anyone can ever be completely, totally and utterly sure about. That he/she exists and can think. Everything else is unprovable.

"sayou" ? Right back at you. :D

This question was put to me by a friend. He believes that humanity has caged itself in bars of systematic obedience and obeys itself continuously. The sense of an individual ...

My life, love? 1. 10/10, because i couldn't get it translated. 2. 9/10, lol.

"It was five in the morning, a light fog covering the beach." - this mixes present and past: "was" and "covering", change one or the other. "asked Rowan of nothing ...

Precisely, why use something that has been already overused? Monkeys are original, dragons are very un-original, they show lack of imagination, and I hope the members of YWS do have ...

"Lights shone and room reverberated with noise." - I think you mean "the room". "as he begun" - "began". "in tonight show Alezander" - "tonight's", and I'm not sure if ...

This was well written, I coudn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Your style is nice, very fluent. I enjoyed this, it's not up my street but I still found ...

I just wonder if anyone has ever seen a monkey as an internet mascot? I also wonder if anyone hasn't seen a dragon as an internet mascot? I like originality, ...