OfferingUpMyOwnConfusion

It has been said that the world has forgotten love; that the belief in a life of infinite happiness and passion exists only within the confines of one’s own mind. ...

This is a really great poem. You're rhyming flows so easily and smoothly and the emotions you portrayed were powerful. Keep up the great work. You're writing will influence many ...

The imagery in this poem is very beautiful. I especially liked the last line. It was so unexpected and just hit you right in the face...I LOVED it haha. Very ...

One year goes by and not once do I stop and face humanity. Peering through the glass of what I know will lead to fear and intoxication; words form helplessly ...

Broken, unseeing, distant stares. Pupils vexed into another crumbling world; crumbling time Searching for reality, a dignified answer. Those who see you, are blind. Barricaded thoughts scraping at eac

This poem is absolutely beautiful. I loved your choice of words and the way you made them flow together with ease. I don't really have any critiques, plus I just ...

I'm not really the best writer and everything I write is straight from my wavering heart, which in any case, means you most likely won't understand a word I'm saying. ...