OfferingUpMyOwnConfusion

Everyone's pretty much said it for me, but i loved this poem! it was so honest and real. Short and sweet is sometimes just the way to go:)

You words flow really well and for a beginner at poetry you have a way with rhyming! The concept of the story is very "Romeo and Juliet," i love it:) ...

Sometimes poetry isn't supposed to be picked apart, understood, and planned. The words flow out your fingertips as you feel and breathe them. No offense to Jon, I'm just sayin, ...

This was fantastic. I'm not one to post replies, unless what I read really inspires me, and this certainly inspired me a whole lot. My favorite thing is when people ...

“The moment I said it, the moment I opened my mouth, let in your eyelids and bulldozed the life out of me.” Numb. Pry open my thoughts, spill them into ...

A whisper of a word; too grim to bear the sound. You carry on with fears and dreams, praying death won't come around. Wearing your heart on your sleeve, the ...

Pin-pricking, shivering waves, flooding veins. Hollow and heavy, my breath stampeding, racing; a race toward certainty. Unconsciously coherent; believing misconceptions. The world crawling at its knee

This is fantastic, seriously. I loved the overall tone of this poem. Everything just seemed to flow perfectly. This was my favorite part: A world where the dictionary is composed ...

lingering footsteps. "another day," he once told me; words choked out in lethargic gasps. Envision a life of infinite freefall: Toes curled in competition with the scraps of familiar carpet. ...

friendships; whispers of feelings, obvious, yet left unsaid. Only slurred between closed jaws . The remnants of a night infuse your subconscious with questions. Minutes preserved like time capsules in

Simply amazing. That's just about all I can say! It's just flawless =]

Who are we fooling? Do we really expect to find ourselves amidst an overflow of monotonous clones fully clad in Ed Hardy? We might as well parade around with an ...

Like always, I do not have the faintest idea what to say in response to your masterpiece. This is absolutely incredible. I'm literaly at a loss for words. Keep up ...

Hey! I really loved this poem. I can relate 100 percent. When i try too hard to write something substantial it comes out like vomit on paper haha. Anyways, I ...

You have a unique way of describing things and relating your own thoughts and beliefs to the unknown that is creation. I applaud you and your confidence with releasing a ...