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Re: Monster
Swell.
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: Roses are red, and so is Cherry Honey-Brown beer.
Thanks for the critiques, everyone. Like I said, I saw the open box, and i just started writing, no hesitation whatsoever. This was the first draft, and I'm am notorious ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Roses are red, and so is Cherry Honey-Brown beer.
[pre]Jimmy Mallore Trudged out of the convenience store, heading for his car. His typical green bathrobe swayed loosely amongst him. His plastic bag was stretched as far as it could ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Deception! at the Disco [Part 1]
Fair. That's almost R content though. Unless you're savvy with an R story, you might want to shy out of the major thematic elements and accompanying cuss words. Good writing, ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: M-9
This is a pretty good story. Nice and interesting. You might want to bump up the rating just a smidge if there are any more potty words.
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Ni-Hao.
Hey, dude, welcome. I've been apart of this for about three minutes, now, so we're both new.
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Another new man calling in from the internet abyss...
Hello, everyone. Greetings from the land of normal. We all love you guys, with the super creative minds. Problem is, I've got one too, so as soon as everyone started ...
Dec 30, 2007
