Octave

Right off the bat, I can tell you're not sure how to use commas, so I'll link you to a couple of articles about commas. It should help. =D Good ...

To my back, the mattress sags as if beneath the weight of a reclining body, the box springs creak silently, a human warmth that is partially remembered and partially imagined, ...

Well, since you mentioned a work can be in two categories, I'm fairly happy. =D I think maybe we should have a separate supernatural/paranormal forum, though, because it doesn't seem ...

Congrats. You really deserve it, Ultra.

I tested the bug Lumi reported by doing the same thing (except I searched something else), and it did the same thing. I got results from last week and 2007, ...

Upon further consideration, I realized this might have fit Sci-Fi better. :/ Still, I suppose it could go for Gen Fic, as scifi isn't really a big part of the ...

Hi there Hayden! =D So, after reviewing that other piece of yours, I know you're pretty good with prose so I don't need to go super in-depth on this one. ...

Can't say I know how to name cities (I can barely name my own settings), but I'll try to give you some opinions on the rest. =D I personally think ...

Ah, the sweet sound of fighting; not. Fairly sure semi-colon isn't the punctuation mark to use here. Leaves and twigs snapped and crackled beneath me as I walked out the ...

The phrase fairy tale is very good bait if you're planning to catch the likes of me. ;D *moves to review* Once upon a time, there was a princess named ...

Behold, the Commons in the holding room below, elbowing each other and crushing some unfortunate souls against white walls, every one of them engrossed, obsessed, taken by the idea of ...

Larkin Metternich Messy didn't quite do justice to Lark's room. The walls were covered with scribbles, ravings, and essays, the floor littered with chunks of metal and heaps of tools. ...

Sorry. I'm really busy with uni right now. >.O" I promise I'll get to this by this weekend.

Edit: Done! Name: Larkin Metternich Age: 26 Gender: Male Abilities: The aforementioned super-weak telekinesis, please, as well as the ability to see half-sights. ;D Appearance: Lark is tall and thin, ...

Boo! =] Chapter 1: Caught. A dark figure ghosted across the roof of one building and leapt for the next roof, floating down to gently land on the second roof ...