Octave

9/10 - Sounds great! I'd like to read it if you ever write it. Anyway, my idea is set in a future where there is no such thing as a ...

All you got right was the tall and average sized part, stel. xD

I Don't Care - Fall Out Boy

Hello! Again, this is posted in Fictionpress. But it's under the name NJ Collins, my other account. Yes, I know it's long but please bear with me? ^^ And because ...

Uh...Long brown hair, dark blue eyes (there's your avatar right there xP). Medium in height, I think. Maybe around 5"5? 5"4? Somewhere there. Cheerful, optimistic. Am I anywhere close?

Hi babymagic18! I'm here to review your work. Left me wondering if it will get picked up and put back together again but not by him most definetly not by ...

Hi jasmine12! I'm Kara and I'm going to review your work. I'm mostly a grammar and spelling person, if that's okay with you. The entire classroom erupted with chatter about ...

Hi Aundreaa! I'm Kara, nice to meet you. Oh crap!!!!!!! no no no no no im ginna be late again..... Amber threw on her close grabed her neon green book ...

I was listening to my iPod and it hit me like...I don't know. Like a brick in a pie shoved into my face? Anyway, this isn't my usual romantic humor ...

It sounds awesome. HOWEVER you have to be careful. Time travel is tricky and it can cause MAJOR plot holes. It's so tricky it's not tricky any more (if that ...

We're...teenagers...aren't...we?...^^... ...Of course...we...love...ellipses... ...They...are...so...much...fun... ...Kara...Har...greaves... ..FUN...xD

Cold

Hi! Kara here. Anyway, this is nice and simple. I liked it. Is this a teaser or something? I want to read more. :)

Hi TheThing! Kara here. I'm going to review your work. Mike slowly let himself down to the cool, damp pavement of the very early morning. Take out very. It slows ...

Hi! Kara here. I'm going to review your work. You may have to build them up for her.” You can take out "up". It slows down the sentence. Prune unnecessary ...