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Hello! I'm here to review your piece. (Obviously xP) Your promises are hollow, they mean nothing anymore. Your promises are hollow: they mean nothing anymore. It’s nearly every other night ...

Hi Twigg! Kara here to review your story! I wish I could tell her that I did love her and that I was sorry, but I don't think I would ...

I like Skillet and Demon Hunter. Relient K isn't bad.

Hi Windy! I think this should be in fantasy. Just my two cents, of course, but I think it's kind of original. A remake of sorts, right? But anyway, on ...

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade, pee in it and give it to the people who screwed up your life in the first place. Dogs look up to us. ...

Hello! I'm here to review. ^^ The place most of us come from, but hardly anybody remembers what it is. The place most of us came from. But hardly anybody ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work! June’s parents called it CIPA, but the doctors preferred the longer term “Congenital Insensitivity to Pain”, she hated it when they said it ...

It's a test to see if your character is a Mary Sue. It's shorter and simpler than the Mary Sue Litmus Test and that's why I like it. I hope ...

Hi olivia1987uk! I'm here to review! Nobody told the truth, did they? It sounds a bit awkward. Try "Nobody told the truth, right?" I would have felt that I was ...

Sounds great! Just be careful with the Romeo and Juliet thing. And I mean VERY, VERY, VERY careful. You might overdo it without meaning to. ^^

Hey! I'm here to critique again. On to the nitpicks! In the middle of the page, there was a note addressed to Ashlynn. Try addressed to her. The way you ...

Hi! Sorry it took so long. So here I am again. Let's start. “Why the sudden interest in apparel?” Try to use a different word for apparel. Clothes, maybe? Just ...

Wow. Thanks for taking the time to point out the plotholes. I haven't gone so far as to see why Keion believes that killing the mother would reinstate the world ...

Thanks for the feedback. I just went to Wikipedia and checked out the Uglies series. and it does seem familiar to my idea. I'll just have to work around my ...

I don't know, really. I'm a sociopath? 0.0 It just doesn't seem fair after all they did. Leaving them in jail to wallow in their guilt would be a good ...