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Eh, I accidentally clicked submit before the review was finished. ^^"

Of course you can write a story! But you have to try your best to make it as grammatically correct as you possibly can. And after that, have a friend ...

Hey ThornedRose! Kara here. I'm going to review your work to the best of my ability. :wink: Elisabeth looked over at Dinah, who was her co-warrior in training. In the ...

Hallo! Here to review. xD Here we go. Tear marks stained her fragile face, and a sticky, salty sweat stretched across her cheeks. I think you can take out "a" ...

Hey there, Jules! Here to review. First, the nitpicks. Ryan’s antagonists grabbed her hair and pulled her head back. Antagonists? I don't think so. Use another word, please. They punched ...

I think abortion isn't murder (this doesn't go too well with my being a Christian, does it? :( ) Abortion isn't so easy to break down into right or wrong. ...

Because Cain was expelled, he couldn't go to school anymore. And because he couldn't go to school anymore, he had to find a way to earn money. And because he ...

@Ridersofdamar: James sounds like someone Jill can get along with. Friends? (Jill isn't a people person either...) -- When the principal told me that dogs were off limits in the ...

Yay! My first storybook! Jill I got out of my car and slammed the door behind me. The large building loomed before me, almost as if it was meant to ...

Hey! I want to join. If I do this a little wrong, forgive me. This is my first time joining a storybook. Name: Jillian Leicester (Jill) Gender: Female Age/Year: 16 ...

I'm from the Phils too!! (Although I'm not really Filipino by blood, but I still live in the Phils so I guess it counts. And I can't speak Filipino very ...

Hi Kibble! Kara here. I adore reading agent blogs, so I think I can answer your question. I think that yes, your pitch should be more or less the same ...

Hi! First to review!! YES!! Haha. He fell to sleep. He fell asleep. The next morning had ejected him from the depths of a very discomfiting dream; one that had ...

Hi Barrett! *is here to review* He cursed the moon for its cowardice too, for it had seemingly decided him not worthy of its light, despite its earlier promises of ...

Again, fifty points additional to those who critique this due to its sheer length. Please point out any mistakes! Thanks! Also, please tell me if you don't understand, and what ...