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Name: Nolan Lehnsherr Gender: Male Age: 17 Ancestor(s): Magneto from X-men Home: A city boy all the way. Lived in a luxurious penthouse with his mother until he was sent ...

EDIT: I hated the title, so I changed it. Because I don't want an ugly title in my portfolio. xD Like my older work, this is pretty long so I'll ...

Corrections in red. Chapter One: I' Dead? No Way! Dead! You can't be serious. How can I be dead ? Wait, but if I'm dead how come I'm still thinking ...

Corrections in red. heya ^^ I'm back 8) after a long long time, a year now I think :( anyways I decided to start working on something, this is what ...

Harley, Royal Guards Harley wiped the sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand and frowned. A drop of her sweat had already marred the creamy paper of ...

Comments in red. I'm working on getting it self-published This is a true story. Names have been changed for protection of the innocent. For those with a logical brain, go ...

Comments in red. Rated 12+ for violence/gore and very mild cursing. Prologue It was pouring outside that day, the day I first met Melanie. She was just a shadow in ...

Hi TenYo! My comments and edits in red. Mullings of a Failed Musician Extract: January 15th I got a guitar today. It's cheap, and doesn't have an amp, but it's ...

Name: Harley Age: 15 Description of appearance: Long curly brown hair, green eyes and freckly skin. She resembles a porcelain doll, with delicate child-like features. Likes wearing dresses, as it's ...

Hi Aldopictions! :D Kara here to review your work! ^_______________________^ The abomination crept slower and slower towards Max. Maybe it's just me, but if the thing crawls slower and slower ...

Hi Nightmares! You're new, aren't you? I'm Kara, nice to meet you. ^^ It's been a while since I've come to YWS, so I might be rusty at this but ...

I personally have this problem from time to time, and the awesome people here in YWS have helped me overcome it. The first thing you do is plot your ideas ...

I know that I've asked for help before because of my inability to finish stories. But this time, I know what the problem is: my inner editor. You see, I ...

Writer's block is always chased away by stuff from DeviantArt, particularly the ones in the digital art section. :D

6/10 It provides good insight to the character, but I'm not really compelled to read more. Rayne had two choices: either she took the help offered her by the injured ...