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Nolan Lehnsherr - 1.17 PM, Dorm A2 When the snake bit the boy on the leg, Nolan had to bite his lip to keep from laughing. He had already been ...

Character Profile Name: Cameron Nelton Call name (for the earwigs): Alpha Gender: Male Age: (young gun: 10-15, others 16+) 24 Personality: Cam is a daredevil. He can't say no to ...

Nolan Lehnsherr - 1.09 PM, Dorm A2 "Oh! I'm so sorry!" She exclaimed, flushing. "I didn't know anyone was inside the room. I hope there's no one else...I'm very sorry, ...

Kyllorac, I have brought Corda in. :) If you didn't get my post, Corda summoned the snake Bart tripped on.

Nolan Lehnsherr - 12:54 - 1.06 PM Disbelief. Pure and utter disbelief. How could that pink monster have resisted his lie? No one resisted his lies. Unless it was a ...

Comments in red. Filled with exhaustion, Emily's eyes fluttered closed. Revise. Filled with exhaustion is modifying Emily's eyes here, not Emily. Which makes it weird. A vision swirled through her ...

Comments in red, Scar. Okay. So in most mythology, it states that Hades can't have children...And I've given it away... Oops. o.O Anyways, this is basically about a girl called ...

Comments in red. By the way, your avatar made me laugh out loud. :) Chapter One - Sanctuary The breeze swept his unruly hair away from his face and back ...

Name: Sienna Afton Age: 26 Personality: Very fact-based. Is a workaholic. Believes the dinosaurians are crazy. Cannot stand having no goals. Very easily dismisses other people. Appearance: Tall, blond

Personally Skins, I like it the way it is without powers. :) It's what drew me to the storybook in the first place.

Nolan Lehnsherr - First day of class, right after the speech For the briefest moment Nolan considered locking his dorm mate out of the room or, at the very least, ...

IN. Name: Noelle Leicester Age (16-21): 18 Gender: Female Appearance (Picture if possible): Long brownish black hair, dark blue eyes. Tallish, around 5"6. History: Noelle was born to a privileged ...

Comments in red. (Hi, first off, I'd like to say that I'm twelve, not eleven - the computer messed up. Also I'm new to this so there's almost definitely a ...

Comments and corrections in red. Okay, so I decided to add more to the beginning of my novel. This is a very, very rough draft of it and needs a ...

Harley touched her head. Stupid spell. This headache was going to last forever. Ugh. She couldn't let the others see her like this. Tracking them down could wait. The headache ...