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Re: Gala Academy(Prolouge)-Revised Version
Comments, as always, in red. I hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. Chapter 1 is coming very soon. "Long ago in a time of war, the ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: In This Heart Of Ours
Comments in red. The moon and the stars are my true loves, the night my only companion. I'll be honest - if this is the first sentence of a novel, ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Darkly, a Solution
Comments in red. Darkly, a solution: Run. Take nothing with you. Have yourself one of those all-American road tri s p, because soon you'll have... r esponsibilities. Ick. Ellipsis for ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Jurassic Park 2055: It Ends Now!
Sienna Afton - Day 1, 2.55 PM The copter sputtered one last time before Sienna finally let out a sigh of relief. Thank God. It wasn't blowing up. She wasn't ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Sneak Peek: "Hate"
Comments in red. This is just a excerpt of the series I pride my self on. Comment if you want me to post every single story, EVER, on YWS. 'Cause ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Gala Academy(Prolouge)
Hey Derek. Comments in red. I hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. I know some of you might consider this an info dump(cause it is?) but ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The letter
Comments in red. Dear Dad, I really, really miss you. It’s been 8 years now; Mom always says you are safe where you are. She says you are in a ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active
(Eep. Guys, we ought to stop referring to Gratian and Bart as redheads. I'm getting confused.) Nolan Lehnsherr - Dorm A2, 2.07 - 2.40 PM That idiot tore up the ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Balema Chapter 1 - boy, isn't that title becoming familiar?
Comments in red, Durrie. First things first. Giant paragraphs scare people away. @@ Chop them up. (In fact, I'll try to chop them up for you in this review.) So, ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: E.D.E.N.
Comments in red. Everything Doesn't End Now EDIT: Just a warning..this is somewhat long. Also, there may be parts that seem out of place. This is due to the fact ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1 excerpt (book)
First things first. You might want to chop it up into paragraphs or everyone who sees this is going to run away. I'm almost tempted to. But I'll fix the ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active
Nolan Lehnsherr - O Week, 1:48 PM "Tell me: do you make a habit of influencing people whenever it's convenient, or can you not control it? I'm not blind. I ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Clements, Lemon and Crunch - Part One - First Draft
Comments in red. Formerly posted as: The Man In The Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One This is intended to be part one of a long story. I've just finished ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active
Note: This is written with the fact that Nolan doesn't know who the others descend from in mind. Also, here we see Nolan can't take back what he said. Nolan ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Eye for an Eye (PG13)
Cameron "Jonathan, we're fine. I'm just tired." And just like that I know Jon is about to make a move on Katy. No way am I going to let him. ...
Apr 13, 2010
