Octave

I'm joining the flash fiction bandwagon, but not the contest. 8] Would It Be Called Pica or Cannibalism? When all the organics died, we divided ourselves into four groups – ...

Hiiii Julien. 8] I'll get to this straight away, and I won't bother with a line by line crit because this is incredibly short. I noticed a few things about ...

Hi there, Eloquent~ So I've no time to give this one of my line by line reviews, but I'll try to be as thorough as I can in this one ...

So, it seems I'm a bit late with this one, but hey, better late than never, right? 8] I have a couple of problems with this story. The most glaring ...

Helloooo Peanut. So I'm ignoring the books I needed to study because I skimmed over the piece, it caught my attention, and the reviews said it was magnificent. 8] Now ...

Honestly, I dislike prologues, so maybe that'll bias me against this. However, I came by to review because I've seen many an unnecessary prologue and I liked your tagline, and ...

Hey there Gummy! So I'm Octave, and I'm here to review your work. I like to be as honest as possible, so to start off on the right foot, I'm ...

Hey there! So YWS recommended I come review this, and here I am. ^^ I'm Octave, and here's to hoping I'll be helpful to you tonight. So you've got a ...

Hey there Truman! So I read this earlier today, and I wanted to review it right away but my mom dragged me out so I had a whole day to ...

Mmmkay. So it's really late here and I just stopped by to do a review, and I guess I got lucky because I found a short piece to critique! 8] ...

Type advantages was mostly for lesser Pokemon, like Jason's or Kristine's. Not Hayden's. Hayden's seemed rather decent. For the most part, Sin was confident Noah who was so much better ...

I have to say this is one of the better pieces I've read on YWS. Well done. However, for all that I liked it, I still think it can be ...

Hey there Snake~ Octave here to review. =D I'm afraid I disagree with the first reviewer. This piece might have potential, but it was really weak so it didn't come ...

Sinclair | Viridian City | Festival Day Now, perhaps it wasn't quite polite to think Viridian was tiny, but it was only the truth. Besides, it wasn't as if being ...

Name: Sinclair Audley Age: 11 Gender: Male Appearance (pic or description): Sinclair Audley is a pretty good-looking boy of average build and considerable height for his age. His messy-but-organized h