Octave

All right, I'll start before this falls to the second page. Noelle Leicester - April 16, 6.45 PM Noelle bit her lip, shivering in the freezing cold. Even her coat ...

Harley, Royal Guards, 6.12 PM At least the headache was subsiding now. But now there were a bunch of magical creatures coming at her, none of them looking too friendly. ...

Nolan Lehnsherr - Anti-Villainy Counselling Classroom, 2.42 PM "Welcome, Mr. Lehnsherr. Good morning, Corda. How can I help you today?" Oh right. This was one of his classes. Still, something ...

Comments in red. Okay, so this is the prologue to my story. I had the story posted, but I decided to change up the point of view from third-person to ...

Comments in red. Okay I revised and edited so it should be okay now. You all can still critique if you like though... :mrgreen: The Dream Snatcher~ The sky is ...

Comments in red. Note to mods: Capital letters are fully intended in this title. ^_^ Anyway, these are the first three chapters of FREAK. Besides any other comments you have, ...

Comments in red. The sky is alight. Blazing. The blue of it is almost gone; replaced with pink and orange. My eyes reflect the colour, every shining detail of them. ...

Comments in red. I'm so stupid, Ace Finn thought as he lay on his bed, almost relishing the feel of Tristan’s fingertips on his bare chest. I don't know what's ...

Comments in red. It is not a stress reliever or hobby. It is an addiction that has consumed my mind for as long as I can remember. Good beginning. The ...

Comments in red. Years ago, in places not even I know of, Master Keever, the daredevil of all band directors, lived and trained among the best. She was a loner ...

Comments in red. So this is a story I wrote for a contest. It had to be no more than four pages, so sorry if some parts are info dumps. ...

Comments in red. "So, what happened on the afternoon of October 31st?" the officer asked. I had to tell him the story which wasn't really a story seeing as I ...

Comments and corrections in red. This is basically the beginning of something that I hope will turn out quite lovely. Sorry about the awkward ending. :D My world is in ...

Comments in red. I laid my newly bought pages on the table between us. My ink well and pen then followed. Awkward first two sentences. Fix. All the while her ...

Demon and Beast William Butler Yeats For certain minutes at the least That crafty demon and that loud beast That plague me day and night Ran out of my sight; ...