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  • Archive Re: Jurassic Park 2055: It Ends Now!

    Sienna - Day 1, 7 PM "The children are missing!" First they lost the leader. Now they lost the children. Sienna might as well take her chances out there in ...

    Apr 20, 2010
  • OOC Archive Re: Out from the Sea DT [Applications Closed]

    Name: Gabriel "Gabe" Slate Age: 26 Gender: Male Appearance: Job: Stowaway, but that's not really a job. xD Side: Neutral as of the beginning (Black Market or Smithsonian) History Technically ...

    Apr 20, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Their Secret Lives: edited

    Comments in red. I will fix the formatting to the best of my abilities. Chapter One " I h ate y ou!!!!!!!!!! " First of all - exclamation points are ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Daughter of Snow White

    I adore fairytale remakes, so I'm going to crit this. Comments in red. The mirror lay on the wall. The word "lay" doesn't seem to click for me here. It’s ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Archive Re: Eidolon's Chains

    Harley, Royal Guard - 6:15 PM Harley was way ahead of the other girl. Harley shoved the librarian towards the magical woman and made a break for it. The rest ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Archive Re: The Resistance

    Noelle "The world's our oyster, guys." Yeah, but it wouldn't be for long if Noelle didn't hide. She put on a pair of shades as one of her father's workers ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Nolan Lehnsherr - 7.50 PM Painful horrible Liam Bolt lizard zapped nasty terrifying dirty unsanitary food flying insane - MADNESS. All of it, pure and utter madness. Then there were ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Archive Re: Out from the Sea

    Save me a Smithsonian spot. ;)

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Pokemon

    *EDIT* Sorry Leth. I failed. :( I have absolutely no idea what's going on, and I don't even know some of the pokemon here...>>" I'm afraid I'll have to pull ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Nolan Lehnsherr - 7.30 PM, Cafeteria Before Nolan hit the ground he managed to put his hands in front of him, saving himself from kissing the floor. But bloody hell, ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: The Resistance

    Noelle Leicester - 7.10 PM "I'm Sam Blackburn. All of us in favor of getting the hell out of Dodge, huh?" Some of the kids glanced at Sam but other ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Falling into Darkness [Weight of the World - Prologue]

    Comments in red. The demonic voices ring through my head. Give in. Give up. They whisper to me sweetly. I disagree with the first reviewer. Sweetly is a good choice ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (1)

    Comments in red. A/N: An idea I'm brainstorming, but have a pretty good idea if its direction. (: This is the start, although I'm not sure if it's more prologue ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Guys, Nolan has levelled up and can now move tiny objects with his mind. Nolan Lehnsherr - 6.17 PM When she latched onto him and muttered something, his first instinct ...

    Apr 17, 2010
  • Archive Re: Jurassic Park 2055: It Ends Now!

    Sienna - 3.15 PM, Day 1 "Why do I get the feeling that coming here is just as stupid as allowing ourselves to get eaten?" Drake muttered. Sienna said nothing, ...

    Apr 17, 2010


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