Octave

Isaac Vanderbilt - The Bar, 1.18PM The colorless drink swished gently in the wine glass Isaac held. He lifted it to the light, scanning the liquid for any unwanted particles ...

Nolan Lehnsherr - Cafe - Tuesday, 2.57 PM (Level 2.7) "Corda, I don't understand things anymore." Nolan remembered the "suicide" incident and a sick glee formed in the pit of ...

General Fabian - Ruins of Donovan Fabian's Office - 12.15 PM She sat still as a statue, a mug of steaming coffee in one hand and a stress ball in ...

Comments in red. Well, I've had several tries at this and I hope the latest is an imporvement. What I really want advice on is, should I chew the second ...

Sorry it took me a while to get to this. Anyway, comments in red. Background info, I started on this book a few months ago, even uploaded a few chapters ...

Nolan Lehnsherr - Room B1 - Tuesday, 9.10 AM (Level 2.6) "You can be really silly sometimes, Nolan." She didn't particularly look like hell...more like his second stepfather having a ...

Will finish this later. Name: Isaac Vanderbilt Age: 21 Job: Lieutenant Commander (Right below Roan, basically 3rd-in-command) Description: Isaac is a fop through and through, but not as much as ...

General Elisabetta Fabian - Chronos City Military Base, 11.45 AM "Similar accusations were made to fusionists of high regard in both Centurion City and Orion City. I don't think it's ...

Comments in red. There was nothing to hear except a cold, impenetrable silence that rested heavily upon the dankness of our cramped basement. This has an awful lot of adjectives ...

Harley - 11PM, Alley near Planet Love Harley didn't tell Maya or Refina, but she'd peeked inside the club when the bouncer was busy flirting with one of the ladies ...

General Elisabetta Fabian - Fusion Center, 11.12 AM "Elisabetta, are you all right?" Elisabetta looked up and met her stepfather's dark blue eyes. All around her people were rushing out ...

Quintian - Festival Day, 6 PM Ah the festival. Bright lights, scented candles, flowers and the beauty of an untouched village. Quintian smiled and took a deep breath of air. ...

Layton - 7AM, July 4 Layton was having a wonderful breakfast of pancakes and waffles when the letter came in. He already had a vague idea what it was about. ...

Name: Layton Age: 33 Gender: Male Species: Half human, half oracle Appearance: Tall and well-built. Strong-jawed, dark haired and almost black eyes. Likes wearing hooded white robes, like other oracle

Finished! Is this good enough? Name: Elisabetta Fabian Age: 24 Gender: Female Class: Military/Host/I have no idea what you mean by this Rebel/Empire: Empire Appearance: Reddish brown hair usually tied