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One down, and hopefully at least two more to go?

Hey there Retro! I'm going to be your reviewer for tooday. :3 Corrections and comments in red. "Daddy! Daddy , come here" Chloe said. She was dressed in her white ...

Locking due to author's failure to critique another work in AC.

Name: Dax van Curen Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: Dax is fairly scrawny, and stands at 5"10. He's not the tallest of the lot, and he's aware of it. His ...

AN: Hi guys! So, this is a rewrite of I'm Coming Home for Christmas , a short story I posted on the site a while ago. A lot of people ...

Guys, archived storybooks are currently inactive.

Locking this thread, guys, since you put (Done) in the title.

*moved from Double-Trouble Writing Huddle to Homework Help* :mrgreen:

Hey! I'm glad you found a partner and everything, but next time, please keep partner requests to the stickied threads up there.

*moved from Advanced Critiques to Non-fiction* :3

Comments and corrections in red, Isha. Alright, so. I like JUST wrote this. I sort of just started writing, and then I suddenly couldn't stop.... and well, this happened. It ...

Samuelle Park | Santa Olivia Dome | 9:29 AM Why was she here again? Oh yeah, because she wanted to impress Abel. And become a great Pokemon trainer. But who ...

Comments and corrections in red, AM. :3 Breathe… What's with the ellipsis? Purple, Not quite sure if it should be a comma. that's the colour I see every time Samantha ...

Hey! ^^ Jae here to review your work. Comments and corrections will be in red. Hello there! This is a potential preface to a novel I'm working on. It's a ...