Octave

Hey~ ^^ So I reviewed the first time you posted this piece, and I'm coming back to review it again. First things first, I'd advise you to cut out the ...

Hi there~ ^^ Octave here. Anyway, the first thing I want to note about your piece is that your beginning is unbelievably boring. There's no tension in it whatsover, and ...

Hi there Searria! ^^ Sorry it took me so long to get to this. oo" Anyway, I figure I should tell you I didn't read whatever lurked inside the spoiler. ...

Noah | The Attack; Upper East Side Noah groaned. Damn if he could remember much. Luckily, Katie came by, and she seemed all right. She was smiling, as usual. Was ...

>>" Can someone actually define who/what "Prince Charming" is/is like? I can't really answer the question without knowing that. o0"

Noah Holy crap, was he getting bored, and fast. Noah stood on one leg, scratching it with his other foot. He looked around restlessly. God, were they ever going to ...

Name: Hyacinth Landon Age: 29 (9 during Pokebook 1) Gender: Male History: Hyacinth is the youngest of five siblings, with four older sisters. He comes from a fairly affluent family, ...

I'm going to try my hand at this. A black market, in my understanding, is usually a place where the goods sold aren't reported to the government. Anything can be ...

I'll be brutally honest - I disliked this. It's hard to say why I didn't like it. It probably started in the beginning, which felt gimmicky and bland. Sure, it's ...

This is very bland. oo" The concept and the premise should evoke powerful emotions, and if this is what I think it is (a delusional man breaking down), then it's ...

Name: Jaecelle (Yeah, it's weird. xD) Gender: Female (like it's a secret. >>) Star sign: Scorpio Eye color: Brown Clothing style: Intellectual, cause it sounds pretty cool. Hair color: Black ...

After reading this piece, I'm afraid I'm going to have to disagree with the others. >.O" However, I do believe this deserves to be on the front page, among the ...

Name: Noah Porter (More commonly known as Noah Samuels) Age: 15, looks 19-21 Gender: Male Race: Werewolf Skills: Brawling, tracking, being distracting Magical or Non-magical: Non-magical, unless you c

Comments and corrections in red. Maryann was walking to the near by Shop Mart, deciding whether or not she should get a new vacuum cleaner. Time and time again I ...

Sam Park She used to be scared of water. She used to be unable to swim. But by now, she'd almost drowned so many times she'd mastered the art of ...