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OceanGirl

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  • Narrative Poetry Re: lost once again

    its an awesome poem I can say!!!!! I seriously liked your rhymings it was pretty good even though its big poem I could seriously imagine myself being lost! its a ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Two Types of Health

    heyy talkingbird! its a pretty good poem but I wanted you to explain little bit more...... I know you understand me,this idea is very well and precise and I think ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Eternity

    heyy Anwesha! its a pretty good poem you wrote and it actually tells what love means to you. I guess it will be quite good if you write more in ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Blowing Flames

    Its an amazing poem!!! i love it so much!!!!

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The sky - blue sky

    The sky -blue sky is so high, and I would always wonder why is the sky -blue sky! higher than those pine trees, greater than you and me. The sky ...

    Oct 26, 2011


But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)