Nyame

Darn, why does time always seem to move more slowly when one’s doing something boring? Five minutes, two minutes now; perhaps Seb really should be concentrating on what the teacher ...

Thanks everyone!

Thanks for your review! n__n I'll definitely keep your corrections in mind for next time I write~ The drawing of Erica is actually quite deceiving- it's not something that she'd ...

They're all gorgeous : D As I was going through, i was trying to find one to say "I like this one the best!" but actually I couldn't find one; ...

Thanks very much n__n the parasol was really added as a background kind of thing; the picture is rather random and not meant to be a particular 'scene'. I have ...

Ah, very nice x3 I like your writing style a lot, and how you describe things. it's interesting also how you mention small bits of past and characters in there, ...

any c&c on these pictures? The first is my most recent one~ an older one here, but i put much more time into this one n__n;;;

This was it; this was definitely it. Seb looked up at the crumbling building before him. Alright, admittedly it was not what he had been hoping for, but it was ...

Something I noticed is that your tense keeps changing through the story~ you should really stick with just one. Another point is the descriptions of characters- it's better to slowly ...

First thing I noticed is that you have quite a few grammatical errors in there, mostly to do with comma use. There are a lot of sentences in there that ...