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1. What Should be the name of the city Kickassy (Alias, Kirk McClancy) lives in? Kickassia. 2. What should be some of "Kirk"s powers? he should have a giant foot, ...

Peirs can't read, dear. But otherwise, awesome. I love punctuation. =D

Try to keep the styles of the names consistent. So if the village is full of bobs and janes and millys, don't throw in a Vyrenix or suchlike. Try not ...

This is what I do. Sit at the computer. (or a desk) Pull up Microsoft Word. (or a pad) Put your hands on the keyboard. (Or pick up your pen) ...

When I get writer's block I get down >

I agree with you, Lydia (obviously). Personal preference, maybe? Lol. Rosey, maybe you shouldn't read anything I've written then. I cut tags quite often- though I don't think I have ...

Cutting out tags only makes the conversation confusing if it is three way, or one character speaks twice, or you don't say who talked first. For the simple statement/answer conversation, ...

I agree, Amon. Said isn't a bad word, people! It's one of the few words I expect and sometimes even encourage to see repeated! XD

Anyway, isn't 'said' one of those words your brain registers and doesn't notice, so it doesn't matter how many times you use it? I don't worry about it. As snoink ...

1. I'm in the mood. No, seriously, if I try and write when I don't feel right it doesn't turn out too good. To get in the right frame of ...

I notice hieght, eyes, then width of the shoulders. Don't ask me why, I just do. Maybe I have a shoulder fetish XD Also, I dunno why, but everyone I've ...

Well, do make sure you contact me when you post your first part, I would be greatly interested to see how this turns out. And as an Instructor it's my ...

Hrrmmm. The only thing I would have to say about your answers is this- make sure your character doesn't become too perfect. The best characters are the flawed ones, not ...

Interesting. An adventure fantasy? I will look forward to reading and hopefully helping you out in the future. ^^ It's a good thing you have it planned, but is this ...

Go read some books, and if you like the fight scenes in them, analyze what makes them good. Short impact sentences, strong imagery, and emotions are all important. If you're ...