Nutty

:smt046 :smt043 brilliant. I should have started raiding your portfolio long ago. :p

*rolls on floor laughing* Only Aet could come up with something so utterly bad but strangely funny. Hehe.

Nutty followed in a daze. She had no idea what was going on. "Maybe I've been named well, after all." She muttered to herself. Poking alice in the back, she ...

Woah, this was good. Extremely good. I can't see any typos, and your structure is great. I have to find something to actually crit on, now 0.o Interesting start to ...

Exactly. ^^ This is not a chat site :p

That's the whole point, wasn't it? to get members more active, and not just using the chat. That's what I thought 0.o

(head/desk) thanks, guys. -.-

Okay, it seems the nit picking has been done for me, so I'll just look at the content, eh? The biginning was good, she truely seems scared and intimidated, which ...

Nutty ran out from a corridor to join the group. "What the hell is going on? what are all the explosions?" "Never mind! Just run!" Nutty followed the others, wondering ...

I've learnt a lot from this site, and have decided to resurrect my first story. I've made a lot of changes- I hope it works out better. ---------------------------- Steam rose ...

Yay! Very much improved. Though you seem to have a mixture of formal and informal words in your writing. I'm not talking about the dialogue, that's normal, but such as ...

Hmm, I beg to differ from Andy's comments. How would I four year old know the law? And I found his actions to be actually beyond his years, not stupid ...

Well, I like it. Which is something, I'm not into poetry :p Just do some proof reading, no? I find the easier it is to read, the more critiques you ...

Gathers stood behind stalls do you mean gatherers? or is this a special name? I said politely even though I was kind of ticked that she nearly made me fall ...

Another epic chapter. :p I liked the end section, but then I like people jumping out with knives lol. Cliff hangers are gooooood.... Cassandra is scary. and a bit psycho... ...