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Re: Silent whispers
I originally posted this under other fiction, but have decided to make it a fantasy. It has been edited and reviewed, as well as added to. Darkness. Velvet black, the ...
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: Delihla- a girl who lives in Hell
Hey! (and sadly species only "look" at the same species) ... Sorry, this confused me. She said she was the only human, but species only look at the members of ...
Jul 29, 2008 -
Re: i sent my first post to myself. :)
Heya! ^^ That was all I could think of lying on my back on the cold floor. Hmm. The sentence before was strong, which is good, but this seems... awkward, ...
Jul 29, 2008 -
Re: Crawling
As I crawled through the ever-decreasing chasm Huh? ever decreasing chasm? .... what does that mean? The numb feeling came from my fear of losing him then, rather than the ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
......*points to the avatar* like that?
May 22, 2008 -
Re: For Fantasy writers- The test
Origionally from rinkworks.com, I found this test. Basically, if you answer any of these questions with "yes", your story has cliche elements, and you fail. Good luck (my story failed ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chinise Vampire Clan vs Vampire Europian society
-I only want one character :P- Name: Tria Gender: Female Race: European Appearance: Tall, slim. Dark brown hair, brown almost black eyes. Wears black nose and eyebrow studs. Age: 17 ...
May 18, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Nutty watched adam go, her armor shedding off. "Umm... Adam?" Nutty realised adam had forgotten that without the added power, Nutty couldn't move. Or breathe. "Uh..." Nutty slowly turned purple ...
May 18, 2008 -
Re: I'm just another newbie :)
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I love music too, especially meaningful lyrics- but then, I love meaningless, random ones too. *grudgingly* I suppose aus is okay.... But I like New Zealand ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Nutty roared, and shook her head to recover. Resting breifly on the rock, she scanned around her frantically. "Adam, are you alright?" "Yeah. Good thing I wasn't in between you ...
Mar 29, 2008 -
Re: Spanking children. Discipline or abuse?
It's discipline. Children aren't born to know what right or wrong is, or what good and naughty is, and it's the parents responsibility to teach them this. Spanking, or smacking ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Nutty narrowed her eyes, feeling the strange power course through her. Elisandro was ahead, streaking towards the station. "Can you go faster?" "If I was non-magical? No. There's no friction ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Nutty looked Bella over. "She'll be okay. Well, after I do this..." nutty tapped her with her spork, and muttered a few words, "she will." Jordan glanced back at the ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Aliens
-I suppose I should ignore the last post, then?- Grei rushed to the window as her ship touched touched down beside the princess's. She was quickly repremanded. "Recruit! Get back ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: My YWS Reunion Dream...
Lol in my one it was basically just the CRA-ers talking about some random expedition (this dream was a long time ago) but I saw andy and alice and lucy ...
Mar 1, 2008
