Nutty

I'm not great at essays, but I'll take a look :p No daughter should be angry towards her Pa and be abused. I would use father. Essays are formal, and ...

Nutty frowned. "It seemed okay when Adam decided to boost my own magic, out in space. Mind you, it made me very tired, much more tired then my own." Nutty ...

Banned for excessive happiness. :P

Nutty shrugged, then glared at the orb. Picking it up, she glared into its depths. It flared a bright white, and with a shout, Nutty dropped it. It hit the ...

Pavement=sidewalk=footpath lmao! :p

I know someone...sort of famous. My dad and uncle grew up with the bass player of The D4, who never made it huge but were known overseas, and I saw ...

Oh god. I really hope I've improved, considering this was my first review, a year and a bit ago now= Don't forget the importance of sentence length. If sentences are ...

Nutty chewed her lip, the uneasy feeling making the hairs prickle on her neck. "This really doesn't feel... right...." Bella looked around. "It's just a room. I mean, we're probably ...

Nutty peered over Alice's shoulder. "It says that Atlantis was destroyed. Well, that's a bummer." Bella scoffed. "Of course it was, it was submerged under water. Or that's the theory ...

Nutty raised her eyebrow. "She's going to go into the captain's room... when he's not there?" Matt blinked, poking the bruise spreading across his forehead. "Ow. So?" Nutty shrugged. "It ...

Nutty looked thoughtful, then with no explanation, turned and rushed out of the room. "Hey! Now where are you going?" Alice called, going after her. Matt tapped Moose head on ...

"Well, if he upsets Ravara, there will be trouble." "Where is Ravara?" Matt slapped Moose head on the nose. "No, that's Nutty's chicken." "I sent him on holiday back on ...

Nutty blinked at the door. "Well, maybe he'll find something new. You never can tell in this place." Turning, Nutty saw Alice standing cross-armed in front of her. "Well, you ...

I is back :p Nutty rolled out of bed with a groan, muttering to herself. "Holy....Adam's magic really did me in." Hearing her own comment, Nutty swore. Where the hell ...

*sigh* Well, it does suck. But, funnily enough, since it's shut down, I've actually started to write again. That's gotta be a good thing.