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Re: Faries
in any case the storybook is usually started by the creator. So we wait for cowgirl :P
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Summer Serenity Part 1
Hmm... okay, interesting. Just try adding some punctuation to the dialogue, to make it easier to read- Molly it's nine in the morning wake up!" Molly opened the door of ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Stay Gold
-nudges- Aww, come on. Don't let this die before it started >
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Faries
You reckon? There seems to be a lot of people already... >
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Do you hear me crying?
Haha, I actually liked those last three the most. Reinforces the innocence of the child, in my opinion. Was sad, though. And thought provoking. with one singly Single, you mean? ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Screw Being A Hero
Ah, poor Dallas. Though, I don't think he was the type to write a poem lol! Anyway, I liked it. Not that that counts for much.... I'm useless at poetry... ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Faries
**There seems to be more fairies then humans, so does someone want me to be their guardian? If not, I'll just make a fairy too** Name: James Relm Age: 17 ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: The Zipper of Your Pants
Lies are like a zipper; Made to hold things together, but under strain, hard to keep up. I sighed and touched the fly of my dark jeans, self-consciously checking it ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: The Emo Blood Of My Emo Heart
Haha! this actually made me laugh. Especially the "My feet are small children" Bit. Delightfully random :D
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Stay Gold
Name: Jason Falt Group: greaser Gender:Male Age:17 Appearance: Long, brown hair tied in a ponytail and heavily greased. Tall and wiry, with dark eyes and a wide smile. Wears a ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Choose a hero
I would be interested to see how you would pull off a phoenix- traditionally they are rare and reclusive.
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Book one, book two - what's the point?
W, I think she means how in some books they have two or more books in one novel, linked together- same story, just broken into books. I've read fantasies like ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Meet the newbies and all of you newbies meet us!
First Name: Cheyanne Nickname: Chey Favorite Color: green Song: Um..... I have a lot of those. Forest by system of a down, Sad but true by Metallica, anything by pearl ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Destinies Entwined ch.1. The story of Neil
Interesting.... Hmm... As a kid is biking down the sidewalk he is late as usual. As he bikes past “Big Ted’s Noodle explosion take out” an old fat man yelled ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Equals
It's up to you, I have done both before. If it is minor, I usually just edit the original, but if I do a complete re-write I post it again. ...
Oct 6, 2008
