Nutty

LOL! Hilarious. Absolutely brilliant. Apparently you are a Lizard, snionk. Go the random kittens! :lol:

8/10... very cute ^^

Crouching behind the couch, watching her husband be slaughtered…the maniac’s eyes meeting hers… Be should be 'being', since these lines are in present tense. that she would not get parole, ...

Jason looked up to see a young soc kid running towards them, obviously pissed off. "What's wrong, soc-kid?" Jason reached out and grabbed him by the collar. "You bloody greasers! ...

Very good! I assume this is a stand alone piece? I was interested the whole way through the piece, well done. It was a baby crying. Not just crying, but ...

As soon as I opened the door, I knew I was in for it. I think if I had a knife, I could have sliced the air into chunks and ...

Okay, first of all, have you read the rules? Here at YWS we try to keep a 2:1 review to posted work ratio. In other words, you are supposed to ...

You've been busy! I noticed you've fixed all of the flaws I found.... It's going to be hard to actually give you a decent critique, I didn't spot much wrong ...

Jason walked a few meters past the shop before pulling out the package. "It seems I'm getting a reputation. Damn." He turned to linda and offered her a chocolate bar, ...

Hmmmm..... Well, I think the dialogue flows better in this part, well done ^^ Yeah, as Spring rain said... I don't know where they are. In a city? A resort? ...

Hey! I liked this. And, in spite of the fact English is your second language, I found very little grammar mistakes, and the word choice was overall, decent. Just one ...

Jason sighed as the group of greasers wandered away from the diner. "Damn. And it was just getting exciting too." Linda rolled her eyes. "You're always getting in trouble, Jason. ...

Jason paused outside the diner and stopped whistling. This was Soc turf. He glanced at himself. Obviously greaser. Oh well, it should make things interesting. Besides, he was hungry. He ...

James James looked up from the back of class. "Nice friend you have, Tom." The new girl turned and looked at James, frowning slightly. "Who are you?" "James." "You do ...

Jason Jason scowled at the backs of the frenchman and the soc girl. "Bloody socs. See, now we've gone and let them get away." Leal rolled her eyes. "Jase, go ...