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Jason turned the corner, spotted the group of socs around Ben and Leal and grinned. "Hey! Lover boy!" Sure enough, one of them turned around. It was Zach. "Care to ...

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Hey! I'm sure you'll meet some very nice people here. I'm sixteen too, and have a friend named Laura.... I want to take journalism, next year, too :wink: Anyway. Welcome ...

Haha, I hear you. Sixteen is just a wonderful age, no? Unfortunatly for me I get both boredom and drama. Funfun. So what exactly is this? If it's a blog, ...

That's pretty cool! Mine's custom made too, but I didn't make it. A friend did it for me ^^ it's quite artsy, in a geometrical way...

Okay, famous killers? Jack the Ripper. As a friend has told me, 'Things like vaudeville or musical hall getting less popular in the early 1900s, I'm thinking 1932 end to ...

Hey! I got here, eventually. Sorry for the wait :wink: (ahh but we all know how the story of the ugly duckling ends) I didn't really like this, not in ...

Hey Lauren, Welcome to YWS! And yes, this place has a lot of nationalities. I'm from New Zealand ^^ YWS is great for developing writing, and there is a photography ...

Okay guys, I've been here for a while now, and am now an Instructor, so it is time for me to buckle down and help out! What I will critique: ...

With a sigh, I stood With a sigh, I stood and carried my empty lunch-ware to the front. I'm reading double :wink: Hmm... very well done. I could just see ...

I still love it. ^^ Again, I can't see much to change... and I guess that wraps up the 'crying is out of character' thing. In fact, her actions fit ...

Yet again, very nice. I still don't understand why Mella and Daryl are together....if you can call it that, but I guess that is to be revealed. The only typo ...

Very well done, PA ^^ There's not much I can add, really, I hate to make a judgment before I've read the later parts (which I shall do of course) ...

Hey Fabien. Long time no see ^^ I found the start a little confusing. We never found out who 'she' was. I would still like to have a little more ...

Make sure it's eye catching. You want it to stand out on the shelves, no? I mean, I've named one of my stories 'The Zipper of Your Pants'...random can be ...