Nutty

Mine's 'A doctor's redemption' ...bad, I know. But then so is the story :p

Welcome to YWS even younger one then I, hehe ^^ Interesting writing style you've got there, though, trust me- you'll get more reviews if you actually post it in the ...

Woo! Random snippit. My writing isn't terribly good for nano, I'm afraid: Back in his city apartment the next evening, Cain stepped into the shower. With grim satisfaction he watched ...

Cain was a little creeped out as he entered the forest of retarded apple tree lollipops, but decided to keep moving. “Shuuuuuun the unbeliever! Shuuuuuun!” Yes. I have resorted to ...

I have the baby naming book mum used to find my name on my computer speaker next to me :p I find it's really handy. I mean, for NaNo I ...

Jason turned. "What the F-" Zach stumbled into him, blood dripping down his face. Jason steadied him. "See, Jason? See what happens?" Linda yelled, glaring at all three of them. ...

Linda glared at Jason. "You don't get it, Linda. What are we fighting for? In ten years, where will we be? In jail. Dead. On drugs. What's the point in ...

-laughs- Brilliant. 10/10.

Hey welcome to YWS ^^ I don't really crit or read poerty, (I don't really understand it, to be honest) but I have to mention one thing- one of the ...

Haha... I'm the class of '09 too. Our seniors do something different each year... this year's leavers are going to go for the dinner thing (get drunk) and go paintballing. ...

Haha. I dunno if anyone else has already said this, but I was reading "Juicy Writing, Inspiration and techniques for young writers" by Brigid Lowry, which my aunt has led ...

Okay, I don't know much about photography, but they are really awesome pictures. I lived the one of the paintbrush and the old rusted out car. ^^ And, random comment: ...

She stared defiantly at him, her dark eyes cursing him to a painful eternity in god knows what kind of hell a whore could dream up. Yeah... I couldn't be ...

Samuel, nice uniform ^^ I'm a corporal in the Air Training Corp (NZ) and I must say, your 'ease' is very lopsided >

Haha, my NaNo's not great, but I think this is the best bit: He never wore a raincoat. It seemed an insult to nature. If nature wanted him soaked, then ...