Nutty

Wooden. They are better to doodle with, the leads are usually better quality if you get the ones I do ^^ Plus I do Art class, so I have wooden ...

-laughs- I wasn't fooled for one second. Reading the panicked comments was more amusing then the joke itself! Hehe.

Good god if I were that skinny my hip bones could cut someone! Heh, I could never be too thin, considering I have wide hips and shoulders and a large ...

First off- I wasn't confused at all. I understood the link first time and had no problems from there ^^ I heard Jared open driver’s seat and lean against the ...

Hey! On to the next review. he was afraid it was going to crush 'to crush' doesn't sound right. I would replace it with "going to be crushed." sitting on ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Go read some books, and if you like the fight scenes in them, analyze what makes them good. Short impact sentences, strong imagery, and emotions are all important. If you're ...

You know you're a writer when you think of a plot idea while struggling to do up the zipper in your jeans... True story :p

Candle

You know you're a writer when you start narrating your own actions in your head. You know you're a writer when you have to resist the urge to send a ...

Hey! Sorry for the delay. Well, I must say- I enjoyed reading this. Personally, I like your style of writing, I wasn't tempted to skim read at all. Well done. ...

Yay Heather! You deserve it ^^

Okay well- I'm here to crit. Sorry for the wait >

She stood there, frozen- Her long twig legs shaking. I would suggest getting rid of 'there', it is redundant. Also, replace the '-' with a semi colon- She stood frozen; ...

Ahem. Okay... First off, welcome to YWS! Now to your story. I found it confusing, I wasn't sure what the main character was doing for a start, and it only ...