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Hey. I see you've got a few in-depth crits, but I guess I will do another ;) There was scratching, biting hitting, kicking and ripping. You need a comma between ...

Quote: The view was very beautiful, as the sun was just rising from the east hitting the snow, making a bright, blindingly beautiful glow. It was a strikingly beautiful day ...

Hey! Could you look over this story for me? I'm not sure what you call it, to be honest. It's not fantasy, but it's not romance either. More... realistic fiction? ...

The view was very beautiful, as the sun was just rising from the east hitting the snow, making a bright, blindingly beautiful glow. It was a strikingly beautiful day in ...

Look, Wait, look even deeper. Replace the first comma with a fullstop. Into the deepest depths of hell, there lies the home of demons. Because of the full stop an ...

Woah. It seems this has already been gone over with a fine-toothed comb. I guess I shall do too. I haven't read the above critiques, (just noted the size) so ...

“Hey maddie, Maddie!” Sarah played “Look at Ruby’s wand, come look!” Put a comma after 'played'. What do you mean, she played? It seems like she's shouting excitedly to me. ...

Okay dokay, after reading all about this story, tis only fitting I read it, No? The night had only just begun. Setharos had already settled down in his room and ...

Nate is completely rearranging the site, if you didn't know. Check out his Blog or the information desk for info. I think it's scheduled for early next year, but I'm ...

Well, I use the buttons. Yay buttons! lol

Well, do make sure you contact me when you post your first part, I would be greatly interested to see how this turns out. And as an Instructor it's my ...

Hrrmmm. The only thing I would have to say about your answers is this- make sure your character doesn't become too perfect. The best characters are the flawed ones, not ...

Sweet as, just gotta check, y'know? Can't have people getting lost. Kudos to you for reading the rules, and I saw you had critiqued, great! I like you already :wink: ...

Interesting. An adventure fantasy? I will look forward to reading and hopefully helping you out in the future. ^^ It's a good thing you have it planned, but is this ...

Welcome, Alex! Your friend is right. This is a great place to be. Have a cookie! Hehe. A few rules- Make sure (though I see from your post this won't ...