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Well, it is certainly interesting! ^^ When you look into this man’s eyes it’s just like thunder. 'just' is one of these words I don't like. Almost every time I ...

Okay, this is interesting. Okay, first paragraph. I like the way you have set the scene, and what the MC is doing straight away. That helps with imagery. I would ...

Hey! This is sort of... romantic...not really, more teenage-angst, but I think romance will play a part. Be aware, it's part three, you are welcome to read the first two, ...

I would be oblivious, and probably offend everyone who came near when I frowned, pointed and yelled "Who the Heck are you!?" What would you do if you were given ...

One thing that I have done in the past, and is quite fun too, is to sit down, and put your character through a variety of situations. What would they ...

Thanks very much Castles- that was great ^^ Could you go over this for me? Be aware it's part three, and it *may* be helpful if you quickly read one ...

Finally, I have that lot finished. >

Ugh....that's a hard question. Here are a few of my favourites- Honoured Enemy- Raymond E Fiest Magician- Ray. Fiest The whole Drenai series- David Gemmel The golden fool- Robin Hobb ...

Awesome, thanks for that. Can you do part three now? lol

I'm not happy with this yet, but I'm not quite sure what it needs done to it. It's rather frustrating. Dropping my pen, I sighed. “There. All of your math, ...

Hey! I watched him coyly, silently, nearly predatorily. Predatorily? I can't even say that. And as I thought, my spellcheck informs me there is no such word. Also, I don't ...

) When did you join YWS? 2 March 07. God, I'm coming up on two years old.... 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? ...

Hey! I wrote this a while ago, and I realized I should probably work on it, and continue, It has a few helpful critiques, but I would love another angle ...

Hey! Here to review ^^ I was living in a small village, north of a larger one, which in effect probably branched off into a further. Into a further what? ...

The man started locking his door and piling things before it so that it would not open. He closed the curtains, and lit a small candle, so that he could ...