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Re: Gaea - Chapter 6
You're right, it is darker. The night sky was illuminated by flashes of lightning and hills boomed with rolling thunder. White bolts of lightning crashed to the ground as the ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Kumo fiddled with her braid, glaring at the woman behind the desk. "I won't give it up." "Look, weapons here are expected, but you can't carry around that thing all ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 5
Woah. >.< Hrmm, I don't have much to say about this one, as I didn't spot any major technical flaws, just watch for sentence fragments. On to the plot- I ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Rawr. Name: Kumo Strife Gender: Female Age: 18 Ancestor: Cloud Strife Alliance: Neutral/hero Appearance: She has short, stylized, bone white hair with one braid on the right side of her ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 4
Aphonia 's tears started to stream down her face as she fought the urge to cry, “He is dead. He's gone... gone...” Okay, she's already crying physically, and she cannot ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 3
Hey! I won't be too nit-picky from now on, as I think I've found the only few reoccurring problems. Hrmm, looking at the first few paragraphs, I think you have ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 2
All three sat in uncomfortable wooden chairs made of a timber of red color with no care taken for posterior issues. Woah. Sometimes it's nice to have the simple version, ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 1
Oh god, Excal, I'm so sorry about the delay. Hopefully you can forgive me! Crystal clear water brimming with countless fish that literally jumped into poled nets or frequently into ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: I like pie ^^
0.o Guys, I'm so sorry. I've been trying to get back into the rhythm of school... I'll get on it. Sorry it'll be late, but I'll go start, right now.
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
:o You leaving, Aet? *looks sad* By-ee!
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Strange friendships and how they got started.
Me and Tamora are friends- though originally I couldn't stand her! lol. She moved up a year into my class, and to be honest, she annoyed me. Quite a lot. ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: How'd You Find YWS?
Losing_my_mind made me join, after I critiqued her story through txt message. This is an oooold thread 0.o
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: My Weather Poems
0.o Is that even allowed? ....dude, that's...kinda sad. Why don't you just go and review someone else's work? The point of the points system is so we all help each ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: What do you fear?
I'm afraid of heights- yet I would love to be able to fly. - of losing my friends and family. - of being used and walked over. - of letting ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Get to Know Someone
Basics:: Name:: Cheyanne Age:: 16 (almost 17) Grade:: I'm year 13. Basically- the last year of high school. Group(Popular, jocks, skaters, goths, preps):: I'm in the group of people who ...
Feb 8, 2009
