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Re: Books made into movies?
Hey, Ktg! ^_^ I read a lot of books. Most of them I like. Sometimes they are made into movies. And sometimes, it seems like the movies ruin the book. ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Need a review?
So I had a thread way back when, but that died and went to heaven when senior year came up, but it was fun while it lasted! So here I ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The flowers of dispair
Hey Gillian! I knew instantly that I wanted to find out where they came from, being a private investigator, This insterests me, from what I can tell private investigators are ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Desertion, Existence, Beginnings, and Redemption
Okay, I'm sorry, but I was put off at the very first line. I run through the depraved darkness that the bastard night cast upon the world. What is 'depraved ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Street Walker
Hey sheperd This is interesting, though not strictly captivating. Usually short stories have something to say, and all I can read into this one is one person on the street ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Withstanding the Symphony
You have an interesting prologue here, and I am never quite sure how to review prologues. Grammar and sentence structure: Seemed fine, though you may want to mix up your ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Dead Nyte- Dead Dream (Chap. 1)
Hey XchangeX! Mmmm. First novels. I have to say, I already prefer this one to your other one, funnily enough. It's not so generic, and we already know a little ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: I Think I'm Dead
Oooh, interesting. I've been reading a lot about death on YWS lately, it's kind of concerning. This one is quite interesting, and overall, I liked it. The format and flow ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: With love, Sunshine
Hey Geneve ^^ This story...well, series of diary entries is short and sweet, and hold up quite well on their own. I like the flow you have created, and the ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Molly - Chapter 1
hey Gillian, the first thing I noticed was the formatting. You should try breaking up the wall of text a bit, you know? Sky tried speaking to Sophie this morning ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Girl on the Floor - a moral for today
Hi charlotte, I'm Nutty, but you can call me Chey if you like. Wow, I didn't realise until I looked up the top how young you were! You're pretty good ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: A Man Not Alone
This is... interesting. Is it a stand alone or a one-shot? In his lap he held a book with both hands clutched on either side and a cane to his ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The end
Okay, first off, I didn't see the words 'summer romance' there at all. If I missed it, then I would assume you are from the southern hemisphere and just forgot ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Falling
Hey, I quite enjoyed this. First comment, however, is you don't have to censor yourself in literary works. I would say either leave the word uncensored or get rid of ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: A New Nhyte
Hey XchangeX Pain. Burning, searing pain crept it's way through my now violated veins. Okay, first thing I noticed was the misplaced apostrophe. I suggest you go and read this ...
Sep 1, 2010
