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Comma is ','. I'm pretty sure you mean coma. :wink: painting on the floor- panting? But apart from that, It's a great story. I'll be looking for updates. Au revior! ...

Okay... well, I'm not going to point out the grammer. (they have done that already I'm sure) But I'm interested. A story about a circus preformer? Not one of the ...

love those kobolds.... It's good. A interesting start, but I need to see more. As you were saying about action? It isn't needed yet. Many great stories just begins with ...

this is part 3 mad, there a two parts before this and this isn't going to be the finish.

fantasy is gooooooooooooooooood! :lol: Nah, I love it. Not too much description either. That always annoys me. I'm not one to go through and pick out grammer errors, so I'll ...

I enjoyed it. It was a bit confusing... It jumped around a lot. What is the relevance of the jester? Interesting, making Aries the guy. And is Cleo linked to ...

strange.... (waves stage axe half-heartedly) Man! I want to be strange! hehe... (falls over sideways)

Well, definatly, some places are extremely beautiful. Unfortunatly, they chose mainly out-of-the-way places for LOTR. They filmed all over the country too, so Middle earth has the best of the ...

Meanwhile, Shuan was hanging outside. "Stupid windows! Why do I always get the difficult buildings?" He dragged the window cloth across his 253rd window. His uniform was sopping wet, and ...

In that lat conversation... Who was who exactly? Was maggie the one with a guy after her? or was it rebecca? And read through I've spotted HEAPS of simple mistakes. ...

It's me! I hate talking about myself but I have nothing better to do so... Anyway, I live in the beautiful country of aotearoa, land of the long white cloud... ...

*hides axe behind back* Welcome! I'm sure you'll have fun here. It's a good place to give opinions. I'll keep an eye out for your work. What? this? Oh, I ...

In the mountains, there is a city. Not many know of this city, and of those that do, most avoid it. The winding streets and alleyways are covered with filth, ...

bed

*nudges* I havnt gone yet... five years friendship isn't bad :lol: cool poem. I can't write poems. *pouts* They never sound right